Put two scenes next to each other and say which one does the job better.
You have read it in order. How does the set hold together?
Claurice is learning to make illustrated stories where the same hero, the same companion and the same object survive from one picture to the next. This is where the work is shown while it is still changing. Your eyes are the instrument.
Nothing has been published yet. When Claurice puts a story on the showcase it appears here — you will not need a new password.
Put two scenes next to each other and say which one does the job better.
You have read it in order. How does the set hold together?